Writing A Narrative

This week for Writing my class had to write a narrative about the three little pigs and the big bad wolf.

The three little pigs Its was a very dark and stormy morning, in England. There were three little pigs named Jace, Jacob, Joshua. That one morning the three little pigs had been awoken from the thunder. They all ran into the dining room with a big fright on their faces. In their pyjamas, freezing from top to bottom listening to the thunder get worse each time. ‘ Clink’ the three little pigs turned around, slowly looked around the corner of the dining room with a lot of fear. “ What do you think that was” Jacob asked. Jace and Joshua had no reply, they were too shocked to even think of an answer to Jacobs question. Jacob, slowly walked to the kitchen and grabbed anything he could find that was sharp. Jace and Joshua stayed together following behind Jacob. The three little pigs went hunting around the house to see what had made the noise. Jace and Joshua sweating from the palm of their hands, they kept on following Jacob. ‘Creeeeeeeek’ the bathroom door slowly opened. Jace and Joshua ran downstairs, waiting at the bottom of the staircase. Jacob opened the door and looked around, nothing to be seen on site neither was their any body hiding in their. Jacob was not easily convinced that their was no one in his house. He walked in further to see if anyone was behind the door, “no one?” Jace fearfully asked. As Jacob moves more into the bathroom, he feels a drip on the back of his neck. His looked up, and in a blink of an eye the BIG BAD WOLF was on his back screaming. Jace and Joshua had a brilliant idea. Jace ran up the stairs and locked the door. Jacob screamed “Hey, what are you doing, you just locked me in here with this maniac” Jace replied “ Don’t worry I have a plan” Jace and Joshua quickly ran downstairs, Jace grabbed the phone while Joshua just looked and wondered what are you doing? Jace dialed 999 on the phone. The emergency operator answered, “999 what’s your emergency” Jace’s replied in fear “OH MY GOD HELP, there's an intruder in my house, who locked himself in the bathroom trying to kill my brother” The operator asked “Is the intruder in the bathroom with your brother?” Jace responded with “Yes ma’am.” Three police cars rapidly came around the corner of the three little pigs street. The big bad wolf, starred out of the bathroom window trying to escape. Jacob held him back and shut the window very furiously. Jacob screamed help from the top of his lungs, so the three little pigs didn’t get the blame for anything bad that the big bad wolf had committed. The police headed up the stairs as quickly as they could, while the big bad wolf didn’t know what to do. The police forced the bathroom door open, as the wolf was still on Jacobs back. The police grabbed the big bad wolf off of Jacobs back to take him to jail. Reporters and neighbours were outside seeking what had happened. One police van came to pick the big bad wolf up and take him straight to court where he could be sentenced to how many years or months he deserved. Jacob, Jace and Joshua ran towards each other feeling relieved. “ Well done Jace, you have done a good job,'' Jacob said. And the three little pigs weren’t harassed by the wolf at all……….. well for now.

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