Kia ora Hanah, My name is Mahuta from Kawakawa primary school. I really like your retailing of Matariki it is very cool. I have heard about this story and I made an animation about it you should have a look at it, its on my blog. However you could add in why you retold a story like this or made it easy to read because I couldn't see the words probably. Other than that great work. https://kpsmahutah.blogspot.com/ Blog you later :)
Hi Hanah,Of course you already know me.But I really really liked you retelling of Matariki and the seven sisters.I also liked how you added in facts too!But it was kinda hard to read the words.Other than that I thought it was great.
Hi, my name is Kayla and I go to Ohaeawai primary school. I was scrolling through your blog and I saw this post! I loved the way you re wrote the Matariki and the 7 stars story. It was very different about the seven brothers finding women and then the women disappeared! Next time you could maybe describe more about the characters, and the setting. If you would like to view my blog it is: http://oskaylamayg.blogspot.com
Hi my name is Mollie and I go to Ohaeawai School. I like the way you have told about the 7 Brothers, ADD A QUESTION. Next time you could make a story about the 7 stars.. If you would like to view my blog, my blog is: osmollieb.blogspot.com
Kia ora Hanah, My name is Mahuta from Kawakawa primary school. I really like your retailing of Matariki it is very cool. I have heard about this story and I made an animation about it you should have a look at it, its on my blog. However you could add in why you retold a story like this or made it easy to read because I couldn't see the words probably. Other than that great work. https://kpsmahutah.blogspot.com/
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Hi Hanah,Of course you already know me.But I really really liked you retelling of Matariki and the seven sisters.I also liked how you added in facts too!But it was kinda hard to read the words.Other than that I thought it was great.
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Hi, my name is Kayla and I go to Ohaeawai primary school. I was scrolling through your blog and I saw this post! I loved the way you re wrote the Matariki and the 7 stars story. It was very different about the seven brothers finding women and then the women disappeared! Next time you could maybe describe more about the characters, and the setting. If you would like to view my blog it is: http://oskaylamayg.blogspot.com
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Hi my name is Mollie and I go to Ohaeawai School. I like the way you have told about the 7 Brothers, ADD A QUESTION. Next time you
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