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Tuesday, July 30, 2019

Writing

[This week for writing we had to write a story with a topic of  three choices
what does the key unlock? Where were they rowing to? Why did they need equipment? What is on the other side of the bridge?] 

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  1. AnonymousAugust 1, 2019 at 10:10 AM

    Kia Ora Hanah,
    I thought that your story was amazing,the words you used to explain how nervous you were.I absolutely love how rich in words your story is.The way you explained the bridge dropping and you wondering what happened for this bridge to collapse right in front of you.I was a bit confused though,I didn't know if it was current or past tense.Other then that everything was great,Keep it up
    -Kaya

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